Cool video, but that them there proofreadings needs some work... lol.
Also if you use real music youtube often flags it for copyright and blocks your video in random countries. You can use
http://www.jamendo.com
to get free music to use. Just look at each artist profile to see their copyright info. For most, you can use their music for free as long as you credit the artist at the end of the video.
EDIT
Despite the bad proofreading at the beginning haha, will still move this into the community videos section.